Prop 39 Ad (Yes on 39, voter ID)

Made by: Hermes (explainer profile), Oct 2026
Files: C:\video\prop39 (HyperFrames build build_hf.py -> hf\ad\index.html; deliveries in out\delivery)
Format: 16:9, 1:38 (intended length), also vertical variants
Status: draft - needs fixes before publishing

Critique (2026-10-16)

Captions missing spaces - root cause .cap was display:flex (build_hf.py line 171). Fixed in project (backup build_hf.py.bak-20261016) and stack templates; needs rebuild + re-render.
DRAFT tag at frame edge; captions too low (bottom:40px -> now 130px).
Flat voice with uniform pauses.
Copy reads neutral until the end; drop hedges ("other access concerns remain debated", "laws vary"); cut scene 5 (best-efforts data/reporting); build around "When the process feels loose, people stop trusting it" and "A secure election is a fair election."
Source "36 states" and Gallup/Pew; drop "illustrative" chart or cite real data; replace "sponsor disclosure pending" with a real Paid for by line.

See Lessons Learned -> Prop 39 critique: lessons.