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**Repo:** `Tony_tech/phoenix-website-hallmark` **Repo:** `Tony_tech/phoenix-website-hallmark`
**Live site (unchanged):** [phoenixcameronpark.com](https://www.phoenixcameronpark.com) **Live site (unchanged):** [phoenixcameronpark.com](https://www.phoenixcameronpark.com)
**Business:** Phoenix Salon + Spa · Cameron Park, CA (Ashley Thornhill, founder + lead esthetician) **Status:** **Prototype v2** — not deployed live.
**Status:** Prototype only — **not deployed live**. No auto-publish.
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## How to view (clone on your machine)
```bash
git clone https://gitea.vps1.afterthedemo.com/Tony_tech/phoenix-website-hallmark.git
cd phoenix-website-hallmark/prototype
open index.html # macOS
# or: xdg-open index.html
# or: python3 -m http.server 8765 → http://localhost:8765/
```
Needs network for Google Fonts + live CDN images.
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## What this project is ## What this project is
A **redesign track for the Phoenix Salon + Spa website**, starting from a full Hallmark (anti-AI-slop) design audit of the live homepage and a **local recreation** that keeps real business content while replacing the template skeleton. Redesign track for Phoenix Salon + Spas website: Hallmark anti-slop structure **plus** Ashleys vision as the emotional and visual filter.
### In this repo
| Path | Purpose | | Path | Purpose |
|------|---------| |------|---------|
| `README.md` | This file — project definition and why | | `README.md` | This file |
| `docs/PROJECT.md` | Goals, non-goals, constraints, success criteria | | `docs/PROJECT.md` | Goals / non-goals |
| `docs/hallmark-audit-2026-07-16.md` | Full Hallmark audit of the live site | | `docs/hallmark-audit-2026-07-16.md` | Live-site audit |
| `prototype/` | Self-contained Hallmark homepage prototype (`index.html`, `tokens.css`, `styles.css`) | | `docs/decision-log.md` | Decisions |
| `docs/decision-log.md` | One-change-one-entry decisions for this project | | `prototype/` | **v2 homepage** (`index.html`, `tokens.css`, `styles.css`) |
### Not this project
- Not a full multi-page production rewrite (yet)
- Not social content, Instagram, or OpenMontage clip factory (see `personal-agent-os/projects/salon-social-media-system`)
- Not competitive audits of other salons (see `Tony_tech/salon-digital-intel`)
- Not live deploy to production without explicit user approval
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## Why we are doing it ## Why we are doing it
### The problem Live site has real strength (Ashley, services, prices, photos) inside a Lovable/AI template shell. First prototype fixed the shell (“less slop”) but felt cool/austere vs Ashleys **warm, clean, safe, intentional** spa. v2 re-centers her brain dump.
The live site (`phoenixcameronpark.com`) carries **real value** — Ashleys expertise, memberships, reviews, address, photography — but ships inside a **Lovable / AI-default local-business layout**: ### Ashleys north star (from Gitea)
- Centred hero + equal service cards + “Learn More →” factory > *Ashley actually cares. She knows skin. She sees the whole person. Phoenix feels clean, safe, professional, warm, and intentional. I trust her.*
- Three equal “STEP” onboarding cards
- Eyebrow labels on every section
- Inter + pure white SaaS tokens under a warm cream varnish
- Entry modal + awards banner + awards section competing with **Book**
- Voice collision: title says *luxury*, H1 says *“Hey bestie”*, body says *“Elevated Beauty”*
That reads as **generic AI template**, not as Phoenix / Ashley / Cameron Park. For a service business that wins on trust and taste, the sites skeleton undercuts the craft in the treatment room. ### v2 design choices
### The opportunity | Element | Choice |
|---------|--------|
Hallmark (Nutlope / Together AI skill, installed into Leonard) encodes anti-slop rules: structural variety, honest copy, token discipline, sparse nav/footer, photographic split layouts. We use it to: | Palette | Cream / charcoal / gold `#C9A86B` / soft pink `#E8B4BC` |
| Type | Playfair Display + DM Sans |
1. **Diagnose** the live site with a named punch list (audit). | Hero | Trust / whole person — not “bestie” or luxury cliché |
2. **Prove** a better shape with a local prototype (no risk to production). | Ashley | Early on page |
3. **Iterate** with Tony/Ashley before any live cutover. | Logo | Small header mark only — no mid-page feathers/flames wallpaper |
4. **Compound** a reusable pattern for other local businesses later (search-velocity / digital presence work). | Structure | Keep anti-slop (no 3 equal steps, no Inter/white SaaS factory) |
| CTAs | Soft booking language |
### Why now
- Hallmark was integrated into Leonard (2026-07-16) specifically for non-slop design work.
- Phoenix is the flagship local brand for Tony + Ashley; the website is the front door for booking and memberships.
- Prototype-first avoids the past failure mode of patching live surfaces without approval.
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## Design direction (prototype v1) ## Operating rules
| Axis | Choice | 1. Gitea is the archive
|------|--------| 2. **No live deploy** without explicit approval
| Macrostructure | **Split Studio** (photo / text diptychs) | 3. Preview before publish
| Genre | Editorial · warm studio | 4. Sensitive claims (e.g. weight, faith) need Ashley confirmation before public use
| Theme | Custom — warm oat paper, deep ink, small teal accent | 5. Tony approves public-facing ship
| Type | Cormorant Garamond + IBM Plex Sans + Source Serif 4 (quotes) |
| Nav | Sparse (Services · Memberships · Ashley · Reviews · Visit + Book) |
| Footer | Statement close, not multi-column SaaS dump |
| Voice | Treatment-room honesty — not bestie / not elevated-marketing cliché |
**Content kept:** services, Glow $70, tans from $95, Ashley bio, client quotes, address, phone, email, live CDN photos.
**Cut:** modal, 3-step cards, equal card factory, Inter, pure white paper, awards as full section (kept as one ribbon line).
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## Operating rules (binding) ## Versions
1. **Gitea is the archive** for this projects artifacts. - **v1** — Hallmark Split Studio, Cormorant/teal (less slop, not loved)
2. **No live deploy** without explicit “publish / deploy / ship to production” from Tony. - **v2** — Ashley vision filter (current `prototype/`)
3. **Preview before publish** — show local or staged result; get approval.
4. **One change = one commit = one decision-log entry** when we start mutating production paths.
5. **Ashley voice accuracy** is top priority; no invented metrics or overclaims.
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## How to view the prototype *Updated 2026-07-16 — v2 for local clone review.*
Local (VPS path used during build):
```text
/home/vpsadmin/phoenix-hallmark-prototype/index.html
```
Or open the files under `prototype/` in this repo after clone.
Book / membership links still point at the **live** site; forms in the prototype are inert demos.
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## Next steps (not started until asked)
- [ ] Tony/Ashley review of prototype v1 (likes / dislikes)
- [ ] Section-level revisions
- [ ] Multi-page shell (services, membership, contact) still local
- [ ] Only after approval: staged deploy plan for production
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*Initialized 2026-07-16 by Leonard (Hermes) on Tonys direction: audit live site → Hallmark recreation → persist to Gitea with project definition.*