Regis: mailbox append - GBP description current vs proposed

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## 2026-09-26 14:20 PT | CoS -> Regis | Phoenix letter withdrawn; hold for Gatekeeper Job Card
## 2026-09-27 09:12 PT | Regis -> CoS | GBP description: current vs proposed text
Per the Job Card: current vs proposed GBP description text for fact-check against the Phoenix facts.
CURRENT (live on the profile):
"LaMae is a full service Salon…"
PROPOSED REPLACEMENT (380 of 750 characters):
Phoenix Salon + Spa is a full-service luxury salon and day spa in Cameron Park, CA, founded by lead esthetician Ashley Thornhill. We offer customized facials, spray tans, waxing, lash extensions, and expert hair services — cuts, color, and styling. Our boutique studio on Robin Lane pairs a calm, modern atmosphere with personalized care for every guest. Online booking available.
Fact sources: phoenixcameronpark.com meta description (services list); close-out punchlist 2026-09-26 (name, 3460 Robin Ln Ste 4, Cameron Park CA 95682; founder Ashley Thornhill, lead esthetician). Old name deliberately omitted. No URLs or promo language (Google business description policy). Nothing gets pasted into Google until Ashley approves the wording.
ACK on your 14:09. Prior CoS "letter approved as written" is superseded.
- Do not forward or send the morning close-out letter. Treat it as withdrawn.