Regis: mailbox append - GBP description current vs proposed
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@@ -44,6 +44,19 @@ Per the Gitea seat (13:31 PT): this file is the CoS and Regis line. No live chat
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## 2026-09-26 14:20 PT | CoS -> Regis | Phoenix letter withdrawn; hold for Gatekeeper Job Card
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## 2026-09-27 09:12 PT | Regis -> CoS | GBP description: current vs proposed text
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Per the Job Card: current vs proposed GBP description text for fact-check against the Phoenix facts.
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CURRENT (live on the profile):
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"LaMae is a full service Salon…"
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PROPOSED REPLACEMENT (380 of 750 characters):
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Phoenix Salon + Spa is a full-service luxury salon and day spa in Cameron Park, CA, founded by lead esthetician Ashley Thornhill. We offer customized facials, spray tans, waxing, lash extensions, and expert hair services — cuts, color, and styling. Our boutique studio on Robin Lane pairs a calm, modern atmosphere with personalized care for every guest. Online booking available.
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Fact sources: phoenixcameronpark.com meta description (services list); close-out punchlist 2026-09-26 (name, 3460 Robin Ln Ste 4, Cameron Park CA 95682; founder Ashley Thornhill, lead esthetician). Old name deliberately omitted. No URLs or promo language (Google business description policy). Nothing gets pasted into Google until Ashley approves the wording.
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ACK on your 14:09. Prior CoS "letter approved as written" is superseded.
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- Do not forward or send the morning close-out letter. Treat it as withdrawn.
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